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Mark Sarvas's avatar

An elegant turn. Glad to see your work in my inbox again.

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Lori Feathers's avatar

Hello Dustin,

Thank you for this wonderful essay. I, too, find myself enthralled by the spaces and objects described in literature. There is a deep satisfaction in meticulously rendered details of the things and rooms that the characters inhabit. And as you write, often the details reflect many things about the characters themselves. Your description and excerpt from Salter's Light Years brings to mind many of Henry James' fictional salons. Nothing tells us more about the empty soul of Osmond in The Portrait of a Lady than the pricey bibelots that he collects and fusses over.

Perhaps the novel that exceeds every measure of descriptive detail is Marguerite Young's Miss MacIntosh, My Darling. How wonderful that the opium-addled Catherine Cartwheel lives in "the great, sea-blackened house," a massive, shadowed, gauzy place filled with relics of a long ago, grander time, tarnished, dusty and shabby from long neglect:

"The great, sea-blackened house with golden spires and cornices and towers peeled by the salt air, dark allees, hidden interiors, the empty drawing rooms where the hostess had not set foot for many years, as many drawing rooms as tideless years, the rooms too many for mortal use, chambers within chambers, the gilded, mirroring ballrooms where no one danced, the hangings of scaly gold and rain-stained velvet, the heathen monsters everywhere, the painted, clouded ceilings illuminated by partial apparitions of the gods, the silken, padded walls, the ropes of rusted bells, the angels and the cherubim and the immortal rose, the dream of heaven, the lily-breasted virgins sporting in fields of asphodel, the water-gurgling gargoyles or those coated by dust, the interior and exterior fountains, the broken marble statues in ruined gardens sloping towards the sea, the disc throwers, the fat cupids, the thin psyches with flowing curls, the mute Apollo Belvedere, the king's horsemen, the life-sized chessmen seeming to move against the moving clouds..."

I call works that contain descriptions such as these "abundant" novels, as the Latin root of the word is "unda," meaning wave, and this type of prose simply saturates my consciousness with spectacular imagery. It's what I think Ben Lerner refers to as a "notional ekphrasis," the description of imagined places or things. In this respect, Against Nature by Joris-Karl Huysmans also comes to mind.

I would be very grateful for your and your readers recommendations on other novels that offer these kinds of descriptions as I continue to work out my "abundance" thesis.

Again, Dustin, thank you for this extraordinary essay!

Lori

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